Score: 6
"Fix the sounds, I hear crackling"
date: May 28, 2009
Overall, this really is a piece of C.R.A.P. Contrast-between the voices, Repetition-of the Penguin Science guy, Alignment-it was in the center of the screen, and Proximity-not too many boxes of info, and not too little. Funny how you gave credit to the objects at the end. Did you do this to make me laugh, or did you want to have enough time for the music to play? Good music. The menu before you press play is very good, but clean up the random marks. My eye went all over the place.
You made me laugh, and you had a couple of original ideas-6/10. Want the 10? Fix the crackling noises, and at least make the dinosaur and penguin look like they're walking. You don't have to move their limbs if that's not your style. GJ
May 28, 2009
Author's Response:
Thanks for a really in-depth review. Yes, I only added the objects in the credits for the lulz.