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Gosh, why I haven't a boy for the voices here? ó-o
Well... This little flash based on a short-comic from awkwardturtle17k(devianta rt-account)
And: I'm sorry for my german accent v.v'
why is everyone a girl?
looks like a sex change meteore!
~ Animation/Graphics ~
This submission had decent artwork all around. The quality was what I'm getting used to seeing from Newgrounds submissions with scores around the halfway mark. The animation that you had itself was done well and seemed to be smooth.
The only thing that I can recommend here is to take your time and work on your drawing skills just a little bit.
~ Story/Content ~
A short/weird idea for a flash submission, but it does sound like something Kenny would be doing. The last tip where you were suppose to make sure the person was actually asleep made me laugh a little bit. Other than that it wasn't overly funny or humorous.
Perhaps a few more skits would have made this submission a little bit better.
~ Audio ~
The music that was used fit well as it was from an old South Park episode. The voice actually sounded pretty good, but remember Kenny doesn't talk normal when his hood is on. :P
~ Overall ~
I think the humor needs to be worked on a little bit, a few more skits or scenes could be added, and mainly the artwork should be worked on.
love the german accent
lol that was some funny stuff, could have leaved out the gay scene though
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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