Score: 4

"oh really?"

by: HarryControl

date: May 27, 2009

Well then, I suppose we better call the cops and arrest these people for killing stick people. Ummm.... no. Lol
I actually do agree with you that people shouldn't spam. Making a message is worth a shot, but you should give a better reason why people shouldn't shouldn't spam. Like, what if I started saying that every time someone spams they kill 2 sprite characters? To me, that's kind of............dumb?

I do take in consideration that this is your first Flash and it wasn't that bad. if I said anything that sounded hateful, than I do apologize. I don't want to discourage you, so as a word of encouragement, practice hard and may it be well with you in your future Flash projects. ;)

Score: 6

"Ok.."

by: TheFlipEffect

date: May 27, 2009

Good first flash keep it up, everyone starts with sticks anyway.
Good luck with your future submissions!

Score: 6

"we dont have to think about sticks"

by: IAMNOTAEMO

date: May 27, 2009

because there are millions of sticks and stick wil never be extincted

Score: 3

"Ow, my senses."

by: Valicien

date: May 27, 2009

Well, to tell the truth, tone down the sounds a bit and do not scare the hell out of us. I could barely make out the point of the sounds, so it was completely a turn off from the beginning.

The plot and jokes if any were inherent were just, well bad. I was glad it was so sure to be truthful.

The graphics were not that bad to be honest, albeit not as great I've seen before, but passable. The shaky text was quite annoying. It was not completely unbearable, just gave me a slight headache.

Overall, I'll be truthful.

This was bad. You could work on your art a bit, but I see a style in development. You just need to practice a bit more, and do not use such loud, unnecessary noises.

This is rated low, as it is not very good, but you do have the potential I believe to do better.

Score: 5

"ummmm.."

by: m7mmad

date: May 27, 2009

The idea is Okay but the graphics poor

Good luck