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May 24, 2009 | 5:05 PM EDT

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Author Comments

Sorry theres no scene select I used AS3... Im stupid with Actionscript period.
Also, I hear that people have problems with the Vcam(zooms in on BG)
Im sorry but I dont no the problem
Well looks like I still need alot to learn ^__^ this one has a score lower
than my very first animation! LOL thats just to funny. I guess I dont really deserve that award I got on episode 1 huh? XD lol



Rated 4 / 5 stars May 25, 2009

Very good.

The animation itself was excelent but some of the dialogues were awful.
No offense, but some of the dialogues could have been the dialogues of Full-Life Consequences on youtube.
Non the less good flash, story was a bit lacking at some points but the action was thrilling. A well deserved 8 I'd say.

TechLeSSWaYz responds:

HA good thing Im just the animator then >:]
Director: maaaaan wateve! lol
Thanks though ^_^


Rated 5 / 5 stars May 25, 2009


this was amazing very captivating, everything was jus so top notched, sorry you were jus short another trophy though

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TechLeSSWaYz responds:

lol thanks ^ ^ i was hoping for a trophy too!! but its no big deal ^ ^


Rated 5 / 5 stars May 25, 2009


that was awesome as the first one! looking forward for the next episode!!!

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TechLeSSWaYz responds:

thaaanks :]


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 25, 2009

Good stuff

fights were awesomely done.

sometimes the characters did look a tad more horizontally challenged than their supposed to...if you know what I mean.

other than that, I'd say it was real good, with plenty of action. you should definitly keep it up

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TechLeSSWaYz responds:

Thanks ^ ^


Rated 4 / 5 stars May 25, 2009


I must say that your choreography was innovative despite the occasional anime cliches. You know how to make a good fight.

However, I had to deduct a couple of points for construction. While that sound loop at the beginning is easily avoidable, it should never have been an issue in the first place. It's an easy fix and you should have taken care of it before submitting. That kind of detail matters. You want to appeal to as wide an audience as possible, even those who don't follow directions.

Also, when you have your action sequences separated by story, you should have some sort of chapter select feature. It would be a different case if you had one long action sequence, but waiting between them is tedious during later viewings when I am already familiar with the plot line.

Kudos on the text. You actually managed to have floating text that wasn't intrusive! Good job!


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TechLeSSWaYz responds:

thanks! and your right the beginning was a big problem! Im acually thinking about taking it out... knowing people wont listen to it lol