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May 24, 2009 | 10:52 AM EDT

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This story has been made by me for children aged from 7-10. It was an A-level ICT project and i thought it would be a good idea to post it on here for all to see.

***** only the 1st page has animation, if people like the story i will add animation to the other pages*******




Rated 0 / 5 stars


Just because it's made for kids doesn't give you the right not to try.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Wasn't much of a game.

I won't really say anything about the story since it's made for kids which makes it all right.

However. Basic and Advanced tutorials do not work. When going to the next page the talk from the earlier page does not stop. The animation isn't really that good and only consists of 2 frames or something. Also the whole thing goes down to one choice. To lie or to not lie. That's not much of a game really.

Try putting in more choices for the story instead. And the whole sound thing could use a rework. Also a mute button would be nice if you would rather just read it.

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