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May 23, 2009 | 8:50 PM EDT

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This is my first submission to Newgrounds. I started it over the summer and had a long break because of lack of motivation. But recently, I have been inspired by Puffballs United to get the job done. I had a lot of fun creating it and I hope you all like it. Enjoy!
(It would be really cool if people could give me some good pointers and advice on how to improve - thanks!)



Rated 3 / 5 stars May 23, 2009

Very good for your first submission

The animation was fluent and very good for your first submission but the idea is overdone and cliched. Normally this involves a lot of blood so I respect the fact that you tried to keep a different style of humor. I laughed a little bit on some parts but most of them are expected jokes. Despite it being a bit unoriginal the detail was refined, the animation was good, and you look like you have a lot in store for you in the future

+Somewhat original in its department: +2
+Good animation: +5
+Good detail: +5
-Reused a cliched idea: -2
-The character was a bit bland: -1

Overall: 9/15= 3/5 | 6/10

~Da Bomb Productions~
Keep up the good work. I hope this helps you or at least make you think a little bit. I encourage you to keep animating. Though 6/10 may seem like a low score it's still a 3/5 which is good; better than I get.

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thumbsupguy responds:

Thanks for the in-depth response. And yes, it did help me think a little bit. I wasn't sure what to do for this first animation, so I grabbed a cliche idea and a basic character to start with. My plan was to build my skills until it became easier to make more unique and independent animations.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars May 23, 2009

Very nice

I loved the animation. I hope to see more of you in the future


Rated 4 / 5 stars May 23, 2009

Not bad at all...

but it could use more options. Examples: big trampoline, catapult, oversized slingshot, ACME-esc flying machine, etc.

thumbsupguy responds:

Hey, thanks for the ideas. I'll have to put these into consideration.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 23, 2009

Good job!

For your first animation, this was really well done.

It was humorous, and I didn't even see the Freestyle bit coming, I'll make sure to watch out for cliffs that can punch me in the future. xD

The music choice was a little odd, but I liked all of them, so I didn't care.

thumbsupguy responds:

I'm glad the Freestyle caught you by surprise, that was my hope.