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May 23, 2009 | 8:50 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This is my first submission to Newgrounds. I started it over the summer and had a long break because of lack of motivation. But recently, I have been inspired by Puffballs United to get the job done. I had a lot of fun creating it and I hope you all like it. Enjoy!
(It would be really cool if people could give me some good pointers and advice on how to improve - thanks!)



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

more of a game than a movie

great job for a first submission, most first submissions look like they were drawn in paint and are very choppy lol. this one had great art and ran very smoothly. the music and sfx were good too. it needs more options though. keep it up!


Rated 5 / 5 stars


the freestyle one was random and hilarious!!!!!!!!


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Thumbs up

I see that you put alot of effort into your art. Keep up the good work and your animations will improve. Story wise however there was no real reason why the Dot was failing so I felt no reason to want him to succeed. Perhaps he should be going after a cake or something and the elements keep getting in his way like with the balloons and the wind. Overall, good first submission don't feel discouraged or unmotivated.

thumbsupguy responds:

Ah yes, I guess it had very little plot quality. Thanks for pointing that out.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

good start

keep it up


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Nice idea to make it semi-interactive, and it's pretty funny too! Nice work!

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