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Well, this was actually made in December. I just forgot to put it up. Someone, someday, will write a virus that does this, I swear.
Needs some depth here and there.
I thought your animation had a decent storyline. Granted, I've seen flashes and television shows similar to it, but I thought it was an interesting submission. I liked when the character fell over at the end or when they knocked the letters off Google, I thought that was creative.
The voice quality and resolution could se some work. It seemed like it was louder in some part and choppy in other scenes. The animation could also be tweaked a tad, it would make the flash more entertaining. Overall, it was a cute submission with cool characters.
Orginality is the main factor here, mainly because it worked for you and against you. you can definately improve, this was a decent submission. Adding to the plot would benefit you as well. Keep up the good work!
I think that most people, or at least most of us geek folk, would explore our new domain for a while before tiring of it. That would be great for a sequel.
Pretty funny, and a great flash too :D
verry well done, animation was a bit simplistic and the art wasn't awesome or anything, but.. well.. here I'll sum it up
2-good story (not original, but you did a good and original take on it, evens if it was a bit simplified)
3-voice was easy to hear (though it sounded like you were a bit shy as if there were other people neer by.. try bieng more confident next time ^.^)
4-animation was well enough done that i could enjoy the show without bieng distracted by obvius tweens or really jerky animation
1-that bieng said, the animation could be smother, try increasing the fps and add more frames inbetween each "keyframe"
2-voices were good, (fit the character) but the breathyness kept you well aware that it was a person talking thrue a microphone, again, a bit more guts in the voice should solve that.
all in all, a great job ^.^
Not really wat i expected
Ok, first of all the graphics was not very good , and 2nd of all it was not long.
The voice acting was horrible! you got to make your things correctly.
im giving you 2 stars because of the idea.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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