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For my college assignment I had to create an animation based on a well known superhero. I already know the faults, but it has to be critically reviewed. This animation is more of a 'Day in The Life' rather than a scene taken from the movie.
I thought it was funny
it has good graphics but it is to short and kind of (no afence) pointless but i still think it is good
yea there isnt really any real point to it, it was just a college assignment so i dont really mind if it is pointless, which it pretty much is, thank you for the review
You cut too many corners
I think your biggest flaw is that you cut too many corners where animation was concerned, instead it just looked like a series of different pictures.
Also it had no real defining genre, it didn't have any action nor was it funny :(
yea i think it did look like a slideshow of pictures. i would definatly change lots of things if i were to do this again.
thank you for your review, its appreciated
I liked the movie, although it was a bit short. The animation was definitely not the best but it worked well anyways.
no, the animation is defiantly way to stiff and basclly lacks anything that makes it good.
thank you for your review
Score: 6 / 10
Summary: Nice idea
Review: This is a pretty fun idea, and it made me smile more than once. Possibly add music and voicing instead of the text, I'm sure someone can help you with that. Make sure his feet are visible and animated while shopping, and make something more happen. I know it's supposed to be a simple "day in the life of", but you should be able to squeeze in some events. Cheers
thank you for the score and advice. there were tons of things i wanted to add in but never got the chance, it was only supposed to be a 30 second animation. those text slides saved lots of time in one perspective but in another it makes the animation pretty bad. from my point of view.
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