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Hello there. So this was my graduating project from the Multimedia 3D Animation program at Humber College. Think of it as the animation equivalent of a PHD thesis paper. Except that, unlike a PHD, this was hard work.
I gotta say, it's cool, it's funny that that dragon thing sold a bag of weed for a lolipop, lol, in this economy, that's uncommon
Good But Shocking.
Wow. What a very good and interesting video. This video was very weird. But I liked it. The humor was very goof. Overall. I liked the video a lot man, The thing that stuck of was a nice touch. You did a great job on this video. The graphics where very awesome as well. You did a very good job on this video.
I don't understand.
Why isn't your shit more popular.. It's hilarious and the animation is great.
I recommend getting a new microphone. And if you do - Maybe re-record this flash because it's a great flash and it's underrated.
Add some music too, that would be nice.
Anyway, keep it up.
Awl right then.
Good stuff on the animation front. Great, actually. Your character designs are interesting and stylized. You weren't lazy with movements, and facial expressions are detailed. I like your choices of color. Even backgrounds are nice.
Sound was okay. Your first shot should have started with volume at 50% instead of 0. I couldn't hear shit. While you might say that it's intentional, I as an audience member understand it as something of a mistake. Voice acting was pretty good.
The story is pretty weak. No real conflict or depth of character. You're playing on cheap laughs and vulgar humor, but whatever. It's NewGrounds after all. And Multimedia classes only give a fuck about animation anyway.
Overall, it's a pretty decent piece of work, but I think you should collab with a writer next time. Best of luck.
Thanks, I'm pretty sure this is the first intelligent and helpful review I have ever received, much appreciated.
The animation was good. Just a bit... Weird.
A short film about a park bench
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