The Pretenders by Fro


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Fro

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fallensoul289

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Nick Lentz (PlsurUCantMeshur)

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Submitted: 05/17/2009 | 09:54PM EST

File Info: Movie | 18.9 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score: 4.35 / 5.00

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A big thank you to Tom Fulp for upgrading our upload limit from 10 MB to 20 MB. It's pretty hard to get decent quality out of videos and this really helps us a lot! Yes that's right I said video. Don't worry though it's not your average youtube crap video. It can't be too bad if the owner of the site upgraded my upload limit so I could submit it.

I won't give details away in the author comments about the movie like I usually do. As for the music we have followed every copyright law! The longer songs we used aren't licensed so they are completely legal and free to use. The licensed songs that we used were under the 10% limit that you are allowed so we are safe there too!

~ Actors ~
Nick Lentz - The Cop
Corey Fromille - The Plaid Killer
Cody Lentz - Cop's Brother

Also, thank you to fallensoul289 for putting the ads on the submission. You saved me a lot of work!

If you want to see the higher quality version of this video then you can watch it here on Break.com. (Minus any spaces in the link caused by Newgrounds) (http://www.break.com/use rcontent/2009/5/the-prete nders-723798.html).

Since the submission is over 18 MB why don't you go get something to eat or drink? The submission itself is over 6 minutes. Or you could click on the ad on the loading screen and play that game it contains that you always wanted to try, but never really had the time to do it.

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Average Score: 8.8 / 10

Score: 8
sisoriboy19

"lol"

date: September 24, 2009

mine wouldnt load

September 25, 2009

Author's Response:

Lol so you reviewed it without watching it? Sucks to have a slow computer huh.

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Score: 10
SpikeVallentine

"heheheh"

date: September 2, 2009

I love the twistttt. well done with that!

September 2, 2009

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Plot twists are awesome!

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Score: 9
Haggard

"Nice"

date: June 19, 2009

Again a pretty good movie. The story starts off great with that investigator theme and ends in an unexpected punchline.

The movie is a bit too dark at times. While it works quite well in the very beginning where Nick enters the house and talks about his job it's a bit hard to see what's going on once he goes to the fridge.

It would also have been nice if you had used toy guns and sound effects until Cody appears on the scene. While it is hilarious to watch two guys shooting at each other with their bare hands (and it also reminds me of that one episode of South Park) the punch line would have been even better if the viewer could actually see what you two where imagine.

{ Review Request Club }

June 19, 2009

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We've addressed the lighting in our newest movie. Beneath the Sheets 2.

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Score: 8
Imacow

"Haha"

by: Imacow
date: June 14, 2009

-Good-
The whole cop/private detective thing was pretty funny. The ending punchline was unexpected and funny. Also Tostinos Pizza Rolls FTW. The music was pretty good and worked with the movie.

-Bad-
Well a lot of the time the movie was really dark, at some points too dark I thought. It was dragged out and boring at some points but still good. Another thing that bothered me was that you guys were wearing socks while shooting at each other... yeah that's it.

-Overall-
A nice little movie, I liked the ending.

~Review Request Club

June 14, 2009

Author's Response:

We can't wear shoes in my friends parents house. XD

Thanks for the review.

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Score: 10
Sonofkirk

"Ah you just submitted something new :P"

date: June 8, 2009

Haha sorry if I'm a bit late, you know alcoh... hum wait, school keeps me away from the computer and NG. On the subject now, I really liked it overall. The story line was cool and captivating in the beginning, but as Coop said underneath, it gets boring after some minutes, it was mainly due to the fact the actions were long.

To avoid that in your next movie, you could try to reduce the length of the scenes. For instance the scenes are a bit disjointed and don't hand out together very well, but nothing too bad. Also I noticed the music quality was decent although you could make the narrator voice cleaner with a better mic or recording software :).

June 8, 2009

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You must have been drunk when you wrote this review.

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