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before you get any suspicions, this isnt what you tink it is. all i ask is that you give it a try, watch it to the end and think outside the box. music by staticnoise. (btw, theres a fake ending, it says "the end" but keep watching)
Just because he's a beginner flash animator doesn't mean you should cut him any slack. That's how a person improves. With criticism.
But yeah, this was pretty bad. You just kept resizing the things and the only actual drawings were just a stickfigure and a badly drawn tile. You also put some music on there, i see. It didn't match the animation and served only as to fulfill the lack of voices.
If at least your stickfigure was like the icon, and was actually animated, it would be much better, and although still not very good, i'd still vote it higher.
Also, I think the guy underneath me is joking. We do that a lot on NG, i think you already know.
...And it seems you tell people who didn't like it that it was meant to be crappy, but then the guy below me got "THE STUFF YOU WANT TO HEAR" (So you don't want any criticism... Stupid kid, then you can't even be called an artist of any kind) and "so that that, ppl who hate my flash skills" and also "as long as there's still one or two ppl out there who like my flash animations, ill keep making them FOREVER."
Also, I saw your other flash...It was better, but why make a flash that's "supposed to be crappy"? At least make it 'Jerry Jacksons' crappy, not THIS.
u said: "(So you don't want any criticism... Stupid kid, then you can't even be called an artist of any kind)" wow. am i supposed to WANT criticism? btw, so much for "constructive" criticism your not supposed to insult the animator. ("stupid kid") look for a fight somewhere else plz. btw, ur the guy who commented like an asshole on my post. wtf is ur prob? i haven't done anything to u and you go and piss me off. who the hell goes around insulting ppl for no reason anyway? understand the fine line between CONSTRUCTIVE criticism and criticism. u said: "Just because he's a beginner flash animator doesn't mean you should cut him any slack. That's how a person improves. With criticism." add one word to that sentence and i would think it would be a fair review.
When I saw all the bad reviews for this movie I thought it must be something stupid like a "tricky" movie, but this was very good. I am a person who could not animate a smily face. So for me to see someone trying to improve and to hear all the pointless negative reviews you assholes write, I get very mad and I want you to know that people will always support beginner artists, and they will alwayse rate your evil reviews as useless or abusive. Wolfdawg125 you don't just get my 5, you EARNED my 5! Woot!!!! Keep 'em Coming!!!!!
YES! THAT'S THE STUFF I WANNA HEAR! and hey, as long as there's still one or two ppl out there who like my flash animations, ill keep making them FOREVER. so that that, ppl who hate my flash skills. your awesome btw.
not so hot
C'mon now, I know you can do better than that. Try using the straight line tool to draw your stick figures, and have some less repetitive music.
sigh, for the last time THEY ARE MENT TO LOOK CRAPPY. THAT WAS THE JOKE. thanx for your opinion on the music. IT WAS CONSTRUCTIVE.
Here is some tips:
I think this movie sucks, because your drawings stinks, and you movements was horrible!
I could in any case understand the hole point, but I don't think this was funny...
- When you animate, are you making everything on one layer? try to make one layer with background, one layer with effects, one layer withthe stick figure on, or at least, use as many layers you want!
- If you need some Stick tutorials, search here on Newgrounds for more help.
- The Ultimate Stick tutorial is perfects for you if you want to make cool effects, or make good movements on your stickfigure.
- since you write so ugly, use Text tool (T) to write better.
Better luck next time
i have a mac lepord so my flash is very different from almost everyone else. ive seen those tutorials, and they have nothing that my comp has on it. iv'e tried that "text tool" and it does nothing. besides if you actually noticed, you would know that i meant for it to have bad animation, bad writing, and bad backgrounds. THAT WAS THE FRIGGIN' JOKE. but hey w/e ya know. yes i am using more then one layer. im just not great at flash. the main thing it has to offer was the jokes. if u didn't like them then thats not my prob. im sorry but i guess u (not unlike alot of others) didn't find this funny. so much for originality. "thanx" for the comment.
i like the part when he jumped and it took two hours!!!LOL
finally! someone who actually is willing to try and think positive about it! thanx for commenting, u rule.
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