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This is a college assignment project. i have only been using flash for a couple months now and this is the first full animation i have produced. i need reviews and constructive criticism to further development and finish the assignment.
it was ok,
id like to see this made into more, and maybe with a bit more accuaracy to the movie, because the dude with the wierd head accually grabs the red headed chick, i should know because i watched it two day ago and ive been going insane and remembering all the time that wierd stuff happens, but still, good
Clever, vary clever.
Made me laugh
Funny stuff, well done :D In order to improve you could work on your character designs a bit more.
That did make me giggle a fair bit, especially the black woman and the "HARRO" Chinese woman.
The cow was just totally random mind, made me laugh all the same.
Also, in response to "jamesbondman" : This animation was part of a college project, and it is probably one of the best animations out of the group that had to do it.
I liked it.
The whole humor was quite good.
Just work some more, or get some more help from a tutor or something.
Also, what college are you at?
Stockton Riverside, in England
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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