Hard To Judge

I'll be honest it was kinda hard to judge. First things first the graphic could use some work but you knew that, just had to say it. The main issue I have with this is it's point. There is none. I've see flash half it's lenght have more point then this. And sorry but I honestly feel pointless thens are spam. Now don't get me wrong it was nice, but still pointless. Sorry.

Not half bad

Good for a first timer and quite original! though you need to stop using shape tweens. THEY SUCK!

AWSOME!

Love it! :D

That was nawt bad :)

Actually I found this quite charming. If I was to improve it, I would AVOID the use of shape tweens, instead morph it frame-by-frame. Although it takes a LOT of work, it gives a MUCH nicer effect. Also, quite the sound a bit... it did get a bit jarring. And, finally, add some music. If you can, get a looping track that will loop seperately from the rest of the flash. I'm not sure how to do that myself, but you could ask on the forums for advice.

Keep up the good work! I look forward to your future submissions :)

here is some hobest feed back :3

for your first flash it was pretty well done. good job.