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my first real flash where i drew my characters, i know it sucks, just leave hobest feedback
Here's my hobest feedback
Well the design was really too simple and I really didn't enjoy how you didn't use a background.
Plus it was so sloppy and fast you could never tell what was going on.
But hey it's your first flash so I can see why it had problems.
Hard To Judge
I'll be honest it was kinda hard to judge. First things first the graphic could use some work but you knew that, just had to say it. The main issue I have with this is it's point. There is none. I've see flash half it's lenght have more point then this. And sorry but I honestly feel pointless thens are spam. Now don't get me wrong it was nice, but still pointless. Sorry.
Not half bad
Good for a first timer and quite original! though you need to stop using shape tweens. THEY SUCK!
Love it! :D
That was nawt bad :)
Actually I found this quite charming. If I was to improve it, I would AVOID the use of shape tweens, instead morph it frame-by-frame. Although it takes a LOT of work, it gives a MUCH nicer effect. Also, quite the sound a bit... it did get a bit jarring. And, finally, add some music. If you can, get a looping track that will loop seperately from the rest of the flash. I'm not sure how to do that myself, but you could ask on the forums for advice.
Keep up the good work! I look forward to your future submissions :)
i had too use shape tweens, it was for a class
glad you liked it
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