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my first proper flash movie! yipee!
It's actually funny!
it wuz pretty good.... maybe u should add sound. that would be funnier.
You should shorten the music, its a bit annoying if it continues to play when the animation is finished.
i should do that... when i find out how...
A all around newby flash
This is basically the kind of flashes I was making in 6th grade. (A year after learning about flash). Don't get discouraged, but this is the kind of flash you show your friends, not the kind of flash you submit on newgrounds. I was shocked and amazed when I saw the quality of the flashes being submitted to newgrounds and this doesn't make the cut. However, I love the choice of music. I got that song from the spiderman soundtrack as well as extended version of what we're all about by sum 41. (If you have it you'll know what I'm talking about.) Anyways keep trying, and it was a decent first attempt but not newgrounds material.
thanks for a good review! and i found flash about two months ago.... and im a 7th grader.
its not good but its a great try and with more work and efort and practice you could make some good things
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