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This is a project I just finished and I'm submitting it and what-not. It is all done by mouse and I hope I can get some critiques on it, even though I didn't have much work effort placed on it.
P.S. You might want to use Pop-up instead of the regular Watch Movie thing.
Kind of lame
I didn't find it funny.
Well, since this was a class project with a DEADLINE, I suppose I did a good job. Also, this is my FIRST flash project, so you can at least give some credit. Sheesh...
atleast you tried
well it was kinda funny, went by a little quick. good job man you'll get there just be patient. atleast you tried. i'll give an a for effort
Thank you, I appreciate you comment. Since this was done in class, I think I did a good job. I'm already considering of making it my hobby, as soon as I get Flash of course.
Pretty cool and funny! I agree with everyone else; sound would improve this a lot (especially for those moments where the text is advancing at a pace where it's too fast to read, at least for me). Otherwise, the art and animation was great!
Thank you. I'll be sure to slow it down next time, just for you lol.
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wtf? everything was so quick i mean it said it was quick but not lightning speed
I'm sorry, but I'm new at this, so I think I did a good job.
Ok i will give u a 4
It needs sound and color, but the art work was ok
If I was really good with a mouse, I would do all that but I'm not. And I was in class so I had all the cheap stuff, and it is my first one too so next time I'll add all that.
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