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This is a tester for a college assignment any feedback would be super rad.
the pokémon intro you did has already been copyrighted and is a cause of plagiarism and the storyline and pictures could have been improved and the storyline of this has been copied off when ash ketchum on the real thing finds charmander under a rock in a storm. the only difference is that weird looking moon, that is it nothing else!!! Period, end of story!
fuck off you autisic cunt,
a) this is a parody
b)This is a parody of the original Pokémon story not a fucking rip off
c) You have a crazy case of BEING A CUNT SYNDROME
d) DIE IN A FUCKING FIRE.
The message was visible, but you need to re-write it so that it's more dynamic.
Oh... and your credits run backwards... what's with that?
Boring. The scenes were prolonged to the point of boredom. There wasn't much animation, and what there was was looped and a lot. There really wasn't a plot. The character design could have been better. You imported an image that you should have just drew and there wasn't anything really catchy.
It was OK for practice, but practice doesn't belong here unless your practice is amazing. It doesn't seem like effort was put into this. If I were your professor, I'd give you a 40%.
So improve your animation (meaning do more than a dance), have movement, have the scenes go by faster, have a real plot, and maybe make your own characters. At the very least make it a parody like egorapter does.
That was quite weird. I didn't understand much of what was going on though appart from ash being lost in the woods.
ok that was weird it sounded like one of those boring chats you have when your like 4 saying dont walk with strangers
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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