After a few weeks of work, I'm proud to present Korova part 1 of 2.
The story is a bit blurry, meaning not much is told to you yet, but I hope to answer all your questions in part 2.
and just to let you know.
Whenever the screen flashes colours, it is meant to show you what is going on in the main characters mind.
and I KNOW i just resubmitted it from this morning. The other one wasn't working for me so I fixed it so it did and reposted it with a different name.