was good smooth animation should finish it id like to see how it ends up

Well, as you said, this animation is unfinished. It makes me question why you bother to post unfinished work, but I suppose that's not my place.

What I can tell you is that you have a decent stick movie going here. Your characters movements are expressive and relatively natural. The animation itself is well done for a stick movie.

Since this piece is unfinished, I won't bother to rant about that, but rather you should know that your text flies by far too quickly. It's possible to read it, but one has to be paying strict attention in order to accomplish such a feat. Slow it down a bit and give people a little bit of time to process what's going on.

The Muffinman is pretty funny, I like when he nails the guy with a muffin, but you really need to take this further and finish it.

Besides slowing down the text, all I can advise you to do is keep going. Good luck!

It looks amazing man, smooth animations and sound. Its just a shame that it isn't finished! Finish this and it will be great!

i lol'd at the rape joke, and this could be a great series if you continued this