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EDIT 5/12: Added lots of new stuff including a custom pre-loader, custom play button, revamped logo, vCam panning, and improved sound!
A short, experimental flash.
Inspired by Explosms "Cyanide and Happiness."
This is my second flash, so please give constructive criticism!
I mainly focused on:
-action script 2.0
fifth grade humor at its best
im gonna give you a four cuz the animation was good
Short and funny.
Well, the animation was smooth, and it did make me laugh. It was also short and to the point, which complimented the story. All I would suggest is using a consistent line texture and thickness for everything. The paintbrush looked a little awkward under the dotted lines. Still, this was very good. Good job.
This flash really made my day. The mental image that you have provoked made me laugh.
-Trees could use more work
-I recommend you purchase a tablet
-You have a great future
-Surprise and comedic ending
-Nice chalk like style,rarely seen
-Overall,Nice work keep it up,you have a good future
Plot was short, but funny and manageable.. Animation was alright, but a quality tune-up would look nice.
Keep It Up!
A short film about a park bench
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