Score: 10

"Hahahha"

by: Helth

date: May 15, 2009

i find this very funny haha, good humour :D

Helth
5/5

favorited

Score: 7

"Ummmmm....."

by: SniperSymphony

date: May 2, 2009

Although the humor and animation quality are at a 4th grade level, the sound quality is good, and it got a few laughs out of me.

Score: 8

"Good"

by: Noray

date: May 2, 2009

You are improving very well. The humor may be fifth grade, but it is smile-able if not laughable. Definitely work on your art. Add some shading so it doesn't look so basic. (Please take no offense of this, I'm just trying to help) It is very good to see that you are exploring. Keep exploring Flash, and look around at some tutorials.
The roughness (I believe you drew with the line tool set to that rough setting) is very interesting and new. It gives it a Blues Clues look. I'm no toddler but it is a pretty good way of animating, simple and yet effective. The sound effects where well synced with the animation, and the animation had a twist which is always good.

Keep practicing, you have a future in animation (I sound like an ad...).

PS:Voted 5, very good for you (meaning your new to it).

Score: 4

"that was..."

by: orangecola

date: May 1, 2009

fifth grade humor at its best

im gonna give you a four cuz the animation was good

Score: 9

"Short and funny."

by: peanutfoot932

date: May 1, 2009

Well, the animation was smooth, and it did make me laugh. It was also short and to the point, which complimented the story. All I would suggest is using a consistent line texture and thickness for everything. The paintbrush looked a little awkward under the dotted lines. Still, this was very good. Good job.