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Submitted: 04/29/2009 | 01:54AM EST

File Info: Movie | 4.8 MB | Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score: 3.73 / 5.00

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Author Comments

Now that I have my tablet, I thought I would try drawing instead of using stick figures, the problem however is that I am using a 30 day trial because my last flash got gibbled up. So this is somewhat of a test with my tablet, let me know what you think.

I know it's short, so you don't need to really mention it, but I encourage you to rip it apart as much as possible, I know it isn't perfect and I want to improve. But I would prefer it if you would critique it, not be a bastard :)

Enjoy.

Edit: Thanks for the reviews guys, a lot of good tips there, and a good score, I like that green bar on my title :)
Now I need to make the next better to get a blue bar....

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Average Score: 7.2 / 10

Score: 6
SLUG7

"Real people :D"

by: SLUG7
date: October 25, 2009

That was a shitload better than your stickman stuff. I know that it was was probably pretty tough straying from the stick genre and using actual people but seriously, it pays. Keep up the good work mate.

October 26, 2009

Author's Response:

Well well, I remember you! Thanks for the review, always nice to hear from ya.

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Score: 9
Sweetaga

"Great!"

date: May 5, 2009

I liked the choreography and the sound effects. The motions we fluid too. Only think that might help a lil is a bit more color. Great work tho!

May 5, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I have never had anyone comment on the choreography haha, but glad you liked it. It was tough for me to think up different camera angles and such, since I am so used to 2d stick figures. I actually don't plan on adding a lot of color however. After reading everyone's reviews, it seems my biggest weakness is the animations fluidity and pace, which I plan to fix with the next one, color is lower on the list of improvements for me.

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Score: 9
Dead2Animations

"Very nice"

date: April 29, 2009

Very nice very nice, much better then your average stick animations. You should keep animating like thise no matter how long it takes, maybe adding some color, background, very nice and smooth animation!

p.s. set your computers time back 100 years and you will keep flash FOR EVER! :)

April 29, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks man, that is what I plan to do, and I have tried doing that in the past, and it just canceled my trial altogether :P

but thanks for the review

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Score: 8
Dannyortiz

"well done."

date: April 29, 2009

i'm no artist, but ihave tried a tablet and it was hard for me to manage, i commend you on getting farther than i did!

on the animation, i'm dure you can do a better job on the kinda-skippy pausey animation. and your figures need a little work too. but thats probably just cause your using hte tablet for the first time.

it takes soem gettign used too.

April 29, 2009

Author's Response:

Yeah it was a bit tough especially since I was actually more used to using the pad on my laptop. I am not entirely sure what you mean by skippy-pausey, but I am guessing it basically means it doesn't flow as well as it could. Thanks for the review :)

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Score: 9
annyongblack

"exciting !!"

date: April 29, 2009

good animated but character haven't color.

April 29, 2009

Author's Response:

Really, I felt like some parts were choppy and could have been animated better, but yes, color wouldn't hurt.

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