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This is racist as far as I'm concerned and it's poorly animated and ridiculous, don't use Barack as a character, and if you do, use him in a proper fashion, not part of a KFC\shooting spree. I'd suggest take out the shooting, put some more effort into animation and do a better job. 0\5, 0\10.

Score: 7

"over all, decent"

by: yoshimaster32195

date: April 27, 2009

the flash was okay, and kind of funny. I wasn't actually laughing at my computer, but it amused me.
however, id just like to let everyone down there know that you dont need to rate it bad just because 'school shottings are dangerous and scary!' or 'you made fun of barrack obama! waaaah!'
this is just a flash, not an actual shooting. and just because you like barrack obama, it doesnt make this flash 'racist', 'immature', or 'stupid'
people make fun of celebrities all of the time, like george bush and briteny spears. just please take that into consideration before rating it bad.

Score: 10

"lol"

by: Fulgore-X

date: April 27, 2009

this was funny ^^

Score: 6

"Interesting"

by: Sophion-Black

date: April 27, 2009

Racy, dark, but over a piece of work that shows effort.

But seriously... u got a warrant out for ur arrest?

Score: 4

"Putting aside the fact that it is offensive."

by: marc359

date: April 27, 2009

Putting aside the fact that it is offensive I don't have a problem with it. I do not care about the fact that Obama is in it because it would be just as bad if you had put anyone else in it because it is offensive. The idea is not new and nether is the style. I am not looking at this from a human view when I am reviewing this because I am on here to have fun and not to be a total a*sHo*e (young people do not repeat that please because that is a offensive bad word). Next time you upload something i do hope it will have more care and time put into making it (I am not saying you did not put care and/or time into making this). Overall this is the type of thing that makes our future (children) grow up to be rude, hateful and live there lives in a way that makes me worried for them and there happiness. I do hope you take the time to read this and think about how to improve.

And for those of you calling me a un American (put swar word/s here) I am from Canada so I am not from the USA. I have the right to say good things about this video if i want to just as the maker as the right to make it (I think the maker does).

Score: 10

"lmao"

by: Thracian

date: April 28, 2009

This shit cracked me up, my type of humor.

Score: 5

"Offensive but kinda funny"

by: Vortex

date: April 28, 2009

I actually LOL'd when Obama was like wait I can't go without some friend chicken haha

Score: 1

"Columbine had better animation"

by: Coop83

date: May 26, 2009

Well, the plot is about the only redeeming factor in this - you have actually thought about this piece a little and it shows by how things unfold.

Still, you really do need to work on the actual animation - you've done well to give a half decent body to Obama and the next step is to make it move, rather than pushing the still images around the screen. Start with simple things and then when you've been able to get imagery of people walking, you can take it from there, to give more detailed pieces.

If you practice animating things, you'll end up with a piece that people will appreciate a lot more.

[Review Request Club]

Score: 1

"meh"

by: Imacow

date: May 27, 2009

-Good-
You drew one of the characters decently from the waist up, unfortunately you didn't draw much else throughout the movie.

-Bad-
Well, any animation was tweened around or not yours. There was no plot and the voices were uninspired.

-Overall-
Needs some work, practice adding more movement to characters and drawing your own backgrounds.

~Review Request Club

Score: 1

"Not too good at all."

by: Fro

date: June 11, 2009

~ Animation/Graphics ~

Very poor all around. Graphics were terrible. I think instead of the real pictures you should have made all of the backgrounds yourself. That would have made the submission a little bit better. The animation of Obama's head could have still been a picture though.

Instead of using the little arrow thing when they talked you should have created a simple mouth animation. Would have been much better in my opinion.

You really need to work on the animation. Not only does it need more actual animation, but it needs to be much smoother. When the two were walking into the building the animation was very choppy. If you tween it there there isn't any reason to be choppy at all. Not only that, but you need to do things like move their legs in a walking motion.

All of these things would have greatly improved the score of your submission. Still might have had a lower score, but it would have been a bit better.

~ Story/Content ~

Maybe you have a plot going here. Kind of offensive, but their isn't really anything wrong with an offensive flash. I guess the story was kind of boring just because of the lack of good animation. The only way I can see the content becoming better would be by making the animation good.

~ Audio ~

Yuck with the voices. Get a voice actor if you can or just use subtitles. I rather read subtitles than listen to voices like that. A proper voice actor and good lip syncing with the animation would have also improved this submission a bit.

~ Overall ~

Seems like you need a lot of work and a lot of practice, but keep it up and you might be ale to slowly improve. Read up on some tutorials, learn how to tween properly, make more original graphics, and get a hold of a voice actor or two. Good luck in the future.

~ Review Request Club ~

Score: 1

"Not good at all"

by: hashpimp101

date: August 30, 2009

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It was awful, I know I can do better than that. I will upload within a few days.