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This is the very first of the series, its mainly experimental for some new sound effects and story. Dont rate to harsh. I know its not good but dont be too critical and curse for no reason.
Sorry for the lack of music i just cannot find the right song -.-
Yes, i understand where people are coming from with all the bad reviews, BUT i like this one, not as much as the 2nd, but i still like it, it's enjoyable (to me) and i still love the overall concept. Suggestions, yes i have them, alot of them.. but i think you dont want to hear me blabber on about what you could do better, i focus on the positive not the negative. and the positive says you did a good job.
Nice smooth animation
some parts were a bit fast (as in they went by too quickly) left me wondering wtf just happened? when doing something like that try changing the focus of your subject to what should be noticed (easily done by zooming in) add a bit more sounds and maybe some background music and you will have a front pager :D
ACK To FAST!!!
yeah umm that pretty much says it right there
it was interesting.
i would love for you to come back when you get a better imagination.
mortal combat music and narration would be better.
this is a movie.
the caption should be white so we could see and to who is speaking.
for a test ground dont stickit online itll just get hurt.
this made me go to the restroom and stay till it finished and i didnt bother to replay.
Not a Good Start for your Series
If you really do plan on making a series as stated in the description, I can't say that this was a good or even okay start. I will admit that the animation was good considering that this is only your second flash in the portal, but in the grand scheme of things, the visuals were subpar. The story is my chief complaint with this flash. The flash was very short, which might be acceptable for some flash, but for any part of a series it is not. We don't what's going on, who the characters are, what their motivation is, or what there goals are. The audio was not good at all. First and foremost, there was no music, and music is very important for a flash, especially fight scenes. Second, the sound effects did not match what was happening on screen. For example, when the sword came into contact with the enemy, it made a sound that would only be produced if you hit one sword against another. In total, this seems more like a trailer than an episode, and if you really have your heart set on making a series, I advise you to make a revised episode one. Include music, better sound effects, more variety in the visuals and animation, and most of all, make it longer, and you may just have a successful series.
Many series have many different openings. Not all series start by giving ALL the information right away, i would rather spread it through out the series. And sound effects i cant do much. (I also said that my song choices were poor and i couldnt find the right one.) I have looked for a while for a good contact one and that is the closest one i can get. If you have any sound effect suggestions i will be more than happy to know. Next, it basically is a trailer for i said earlier "its mainly experimental". The rest of it will be alot better.
If you will be so kind, start a flash series yourself so i can learn from you, I'm not perfect and i am always looking to better myself. (no sarcasm intended)
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