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Apr 25, 2009 | 6:30 PM EDT

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Just a quick, meaningless short!
Should I make more?
Ideas please!

Reviews


SonicShadowSilverSonicShadowSilver

Rated 4 / 5 stars April 25, 2009

Short but good humour

Probably one of the smallest shorts ever, that I really liked =D
The stick got served his punishment.
I agree with ntndsk. No matter how short it was, that was a good submission and it didn't waste any time.
Maybe add more detail and a background that isn't white.
Even just a rectangle of green for grass and a 20 second attempt at clouds ^^
Well obviously that wouldn't look so good but better than white!

You do indeed show potential. Keep it up ^_^


Bloodspill234 responds:

OK, thank you!


chupacabra907chupacabra907

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 25, 2009

Hi Joby

In the interest of feedback, for a "qiuck meaningless short" it was pretty good. It wasn't just a bunch of thoughtless stick figures killing eachother, and you used ironic humor, that for the energy invested, was rather entertaining. I would say that you show potential. Not really providing you with any ideas, but in the interest of encouragement, I think you could do well in making more. Good luck!!


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Bloodspill234 responds:

OK, thanx!
And hello... chupacabra...


ntndskntndsk

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 25, 2009

Haha

Compared to a lot of the new flash that's been posted just recently, that actually humored me. The animation was decent, and the end was pretty ironic. Overall it was pretty good. Nice work.


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Bloodspill234 responds:

Thank you!


LoganatruxLoganatrux

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars April 25, 2009

It was... ok?

First thing I asked myself was, "Is this this guy's first flash?", because if it is I suppose it isn't too bad considering that fact.

Improvements:

Use smaller brush sizes for the anthill to add more detail
Make the head blow up more realistically
Shape the blood.

Loganatrux


Bloodspill234 responds:

Yes sir...


VelvetEagleVelvetEagle

Rated 4 / 5 stars April 25, 2009

very good, I'll try my best to help

I like the idea definitely, and the sound was good (the laughing ants)
you should try to come up with more of this ironic situations as flashes and practice a lot as far as i could tell your animation was smooth (like the blood flying onto the camera) but you drawing ability could use quite a bit of tuning
good luck in the future


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Bloodspill234 responds:

Thank you!