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hi, hello. wow!
Ah, confidence issues
Standing there, practising his phone voice, only to have the phone ring unexpectedly and the confidence flutter away, like a rare bird from an ornithologist.
I think that there is a good basis for this piece, but you really could do more - the joke with the phone ringing was pretty good, but perhaps have a little more stuff going on in the background. I know you paid attention with things like the fish food, but something going on out of the window could be a nice bonus to this piece.
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I'm not sure what I just watched,
but I sorta liked it.
It was weird. That's for sure. Sort of abstract and somewhat alternative, not something you see too often. The graphics are simple, but not bad. There is a fitting amount of detail to the image, and nothing in the background or anywhere pulls the attention away from what's most important, the guy talking to himself (and later on the phone).
Story-wise, I'm intrigued. It seems like this man is... mad, to say the least. Mentally unstable. He's talking to himself, as if he were talking in a phone. When the phone actually rings, he seems to freak out and just look at it. I really liked your use of sound and noise right here, making the phone seem like something disastrous.
When he actually picked up the phone, however, you lost me. I didn't really get much after that.
Either way, an interesting piece, something different. A breath of fresh air, which doesn't come along too often on NG nowadays.
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-Wow! From the last animation that I watched from you to this one there is so much improvement. Yes, it's almost a two year difference but it really does show that if you stay with flash you can make some good works. I can definitely see that there was some time put into this since it was quite lengthy.
-Biggest improvement is that while you only had one shape for the mouth of the character all of the dialogue was right on que with the mouth animation. Really slow to progress I thought it wasn't going to go anywhere but you eventually proved me wrong when I finally noticed that he was asking different questions and then...the phone rang. It was probably the most annoying ring i've ever heard but it went in a whole new direction that I liked.
-It ended way too abruptly though, there could of been a better ending for this. Maybe have the fish talk back or something come up at the window. Just anything would of been better than what you left it at.
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ok u sude make better art for it
relly uh werid u coulda dont the art alittle better so i guess 3/10
Kind of artistic but the fact it makes no sense kind of ruined it.
The animation style was good but next time add a halfway decent story please.
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