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My second submission to NewGrounds.
This cartoon is an interesting tale of a man who is not quite like any other...
It was okay, but could have been alot better if it weren't for the bad voice recording. The loud pops in the mic were kind of a let down.
The walking could have been WAY better...
This being your second cartoon, I'm sure you're aware (unless you've been doing it intentionally all along) that you animation style is a less refined david firth. It's good for what it is. You get the disturbing ambiance and the segmented humans that look more like dolls. The only think is that you don't seem to have something to call your own yet (besides the devil thing, which is still firth-esque) instead of just ripping off firth, which might give you ridicule from firth fans, I would try to figure out something that you can uniquely call your own.
Thanks for the review. I am a fan of David Firth and I got the idea for the static from him but other than that, I didn't think I was copying his animation style when I made this. From my other reviews, it does seem others think this is similar to his work also. Hopefully I can use your advice and come up with something unique to make me stand apart.
it started out kinda lame, and I decided to keep watching, and it was pretty good. reminds me of salad fingers... but in a more violent way.
lol very weird but i like it!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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