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I made this because i was bored and thought it would be funny, this is my first flash MOVIE so go easy on comments and helpful comments on future flashes are appreciated.
that some crazzy bee
lol i love that the bee exploded XD
A brilliant start
This was really good for somebody's first Flash.
Although the animation wasn't brilliant, your timing along to the music, the cutely-drawn bee and the flower worked to make the bee's mass-explosion freakin' hilarious.
Whilst it's not the best, it does have the basics all Flashes should be able to provide - Entertainment, however brief.
Overall, great job!
Recommend that next time, you work on the backgrounds, and possibly on the explosion detail.
... Woah I sound over-professional...
yes, you do sound profesional, your comment helps a lot. thanks man =D
The animation style is charming, it comes off as cutesy wootsy. I like it, but really, ya coulda went somewhere with it other than spontaneous combustion.
Art : 10
Concept : 5
I cant believe you rated me 10 on the art. i guess i've found my own personal style (i dont mean the spontanious combustion) Thanks a lot! =)
Random, just a bit, but that's okay.
Good job. You had good sound quality, a good (but predictable) song, and some pretty nice animations.
Work on the explosions though. I know, they're difficult. But don't just loop the same explosion over and over, try to make more than one (two would still be better).
Other than that, nice job!
Not bad comments for my first actual movies (not counting my shamful games =P)
Did that bee just explode???? why???? nice style tho.
There's no real reason for it exploding, i guess it overheated.
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