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I did this quick animation for a class at my school, and figured it deserved a chance on Newgrounds.
well built fo a first try i say keep going you may be able to build on your skill and be very good
Lets start off with the important points
Graphics - 4/10 Your art wasn't very good, and seemed too basic
Animation - 8/10 You possess good mastery of animating in flash.
Sound - N/A Your animation would be much better with some kind of sound involved
Story - N/A
Originality - 7/10 Giant transforming robots.
By practicing your art skills, it is possible that you can make a first rate AAA flash. The animating itself is quite good, but the bad art brings it down. The lack of any sound is disappointing, and you would surely have gotten higher scores with it. However, keep up the good work and you will surely be known by the Newgrounds viewers everywhere.
Add Audio and it'll be AWESOME!
It's great animation, but the deep and startling lack of sound really brings the score down.
Just add some "Whooosh" or transforming sound fx and some background music.
Bet most ppl would give it a 7 or 8 after those improvements easily.
but suffers significantly from a lack of soundtrack. Nice animation skills.
why no sound?
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