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A Bid For Freedom

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Uploaded
Apr 20, 2009 | 10:28 PM EDT

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While you load, feel free to read these comments, and also check out the collaborators' sites down below for more great work.
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THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEWS! After receiving over 350, I CAN'T PROMISE I'LL RESPOND TO NEW REVIEWS! I'll try!

Here is the Newgrounds Flash version of "A Bid for Freedom".

It is a story that I wrote and converted into a small fable with images provided by the talented Nacho Rodriguez (who created Mr. Coo and won the #1 slot in Cold Hard Flash's Best Animated) and lush watercolours by his girlfriend Cecilia Deshayes.
It is an illustrated storybook, narrated for your pleasure by the debonair Andy Dennis, with guest turns by Sasuya and Josh "Tomamoto" Tomar you HAVE to hear!
The Storybook route was pursued so it could enter ReNaeNae's excellent Storybook Collab;
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1003968 Talents in writing, art, voice, sound, code etc. should give it a look!

To turn the pages, hover your mouse pointer over the bottom corner of the page, then left-click and drag the page across with your mouse until it fully flips over.
Narration starts on each page as you view it, but you're free to read at your own pace (you can right-click and select "Zoom In", then drag around to see all the fine details).

This story is NOT an attempt at hair-pin-bend trigger-happy balls-to-the-wall FBF hentai-maniac game-parodying shenanigannary. NO REALLY, IT'S NOT!
The power here is in the words and the pictures.
There is COMEDY, ACTION, DRAMA and ROMANCE, all skewed at odd angles.
There's fantasy, exotic locations, body odour, and even a fast car if you stick with it!
Have patience, we've many things to offer you. Stick with us. We're a good group.

Please vote and review showing respect to the combined talent and hard work involved in this Flash. A lot of passion went into this just for you guys, so be fair.
Critique, constructive criticism, suggestions, these are things we graciously accept.
If you vote or review abusively, you let Newgrounds down. Don't.
If this is "not your sort of thing" or you're somehow disappointed by the lack of animation, this is not the fault of anyone involved; no-one's forcing you to watch!

With all this in mind, we hope you enjoy (with your drink or snack of choice) our hard work, vote and review responsibly... and may your day be brighter.

For more awesome while you wait, check out:
www.mistercoo.com (Nacho's site)
http://ceciliadeshayes.blogspot. com (Cecilia's blog)
www.ediblecastle.com (home to Andy Dennis and his mate Will)
www.scarymarymedia.com (earlier collaborative efforts between me, a mate of mine and Nacho, including an award-winning short for the Marbella Film Festival)

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This section is for the creative people out there:

This has been a hot coal in my hands for quite some time, burning with collective passion, yet I've been reluctant to throw it into the fire.
Enough people are happy with the results as they stand for me to go forth and submit it.
Trust that this will blossom over time as we come back to better adorn this work.

My preliminary thanks are on this page:
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1049617/3

I additionally thank DrNeroCF for saving us in the coding department and Deathcon for further help; Joey Young (http://joeymofo.newgrounds.com) for providing sound effects at short notice and the Very Odd House (http://www.theveryoddhou se.com/) for a small snippet of lush score; and to Josh Tomar, introduced late into the project yet he delivered an outstanding performance within minutes of me asking him.
Further thanks go to the Newgrounds Team for their support of this work, and to all Newgrounds users who do the same (including Mr GUS, who is highly underrated: be sure to see his latest http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/483436 and vote for it in this year's Treasure Hunt).
Any other great participants that come to light will be remembered here equally.

Cheers!

Reviews


JAG-JayDeeJAG-JayDee

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Nicely done

I like your writing & drawing. Just a shame it was so short :).


AdamCook responds:

It is. I should have spent a year on it, haha! I had to get it done for the Storybook Collab though, so it was good practice in exercising restraint and saying "Enough is enough, it's good enough, let's see what happens!" For me at least, I think I've delivered enough story for this project.
Anyway, we're all glad you like it!


DCLdaMastaDCLdaMasta

Rated 5 / 5 stars

get off of fucking new grounds

and become a god damn righter! seriously well done


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AdamCook responds:

Hahaha! You're too cool, but I'm going to stick with Newgrounds for a while now; I've got some more ideas I want to unleash in the near future. Check out that PM I sent you!


TheBoogleyTheBoogley

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Fantastic!

I felt as if my computer had turned all paternal on me, and I was curled up under the covers having a story read to me. I loved that odd "computer daddy" feeling, the story, the exquisite artwork and the spirit of collaboration which brought it all about in the first place.


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AdamCook responds:

You know Boogley, I've always seen you as full of good values. Your stuff always seems so warm and homely; even though a cynical eye may expect you to betray something sinister behind the warm smiles and cute creatures, you always seem to end up delivering with well-natured gusto.

I'm so glad that this appealed to you in that way, that for you it brought something more traditional back to a relatively new medium. Thank you very much for adding a bit more sunshine to my day!


undergroundflashundergroundflash

Rated 5 / 5 stars

A fine work, indeed! (Must Watch)

Absolutely brilliant!!!
We seldom find art worthy enough to pull us from this void of confusion.
But, with the turning of each and every page,
I found myself becoming more engulfed by this bitter-sweet reality.
I highly recommend any and everyone to watch.
Not a single thing to complain about.
A Great Change of Pace.

Will we be seeing any future installments?
How long did this piece take to complete?

Say hello to Babs for me!


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AdamCook responds:

"A Great Change of Pace"! That's it! You've got it! That's the sequel right there!

Haha, all jokes aside, it's difficult to say whether this particular project will tell more of a tale than you've seen. Certainly I want to expand it technically and distribute it in interesting ways, but I think I should pursue newer more exciting, more intriguing works in multiple media.

Of course, if this idea gets a lot of support; who knows? Everyone certainly enjoyed their time on this.

This story was conceived as part of the Storybook Collab, which was originally set to end after the month of January. When the deadline got moved back, I realised I could feasibly have a go, and put down a dinner party. This went in a very ambling direction, as I thought about the possibility of the party actually being held in the hull of a ghost's pirate ship populated by demonic drunken fiends.
It would have been very disturbing, visually bizarre and utterly pointless.

Then I thought, a-ha! Scene change! Established a new tack around mid-February, got some visual elements that worked but, oh dear, this action has no end, no resolution! I'm flabbergasted, looking at all the loose ends and trying to tie them up two weeks before the new deadline. What's the deal with this big chandelier then? Aha! Closure was delivered.

For some reason, giddied by my ambition, I honestly thought two weeks would be enough to do all the voicework, a full soundtrack and what in my head was the need for about 50 illustrations.
I almost brought on a migraine private messaging everybody until the deadline was set back to something far more reasonable.
Breathing room that let me trim down to a more sensible 30 images, find the right people and get everything recorded in its own time.
Bada-bing, about 2 and a half months after the thought arrived, here we have the final thing!

Babs sends his regards, and asks if they are any single bees out there looking for a short-term no-commitment relationship.


JacquesDemersJacquesDemers

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good, interresting and new

Hi

I found the idea of turning the pages of a book really interresting. Did you make the images on the computer un scan them ? I didnt read it all is written really too small, it's hard to read. Maybe i would have put more songs and sfx.

In some pages, caracters, smokes, animals, .... could move to make an even more interractiv story.

But very good overall, keep on your good work

8/10
4/5


AdamCook responds:

Aha, some critique! Good points made, and all well taken.

The text issue has been fixed; enjoy!

Songs and SFX are probably the very next thing on our list after that. I've got a great composer interested and might get a variety of songs to warm it up a bit. The sounds are pretty easy to find since Joey helped source the majority of them.

Moving would be cool; like pop-up where they slide about on tabs or something! That would have destroyed any chances of finishing this thing at this stage though. We'll probably do it again though. Interactive? Probably not. "Will you drink the wine? Y/N?" "N - I'd rather drink blood." "Y - Why?"

Cheers for your balanced critique, I'll definitely keep up delivering to the best of my ability and I'm glad despite the lacking elements that you still enjoyed it!