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A mirror in a toy music box is the portal to creepy parallel universe.
Hey guys... Havn't posted a new flash FOREVER!!! Sorry about that... But Now that I'm finally done with school I can get down and dirty with the creations!!! I really hope you all like this one...
Please give me feed back!!!! I NEED IT!!!
Any comment is helpful!!!
Thanks Always! Ashley Voortman
i like your ideas
I think you were on to something here.
i thought it was well executed as well but the ending kinda broke down.
i mean, there was a flash of expectation when nearing the end it seemed like the creepy chick was the one in captivity and i was pumped for an awesome twist...
sadly the ending didn't deliver. not only did it not deliver but it made the whole flash seem pointless. I mean not all flashed NEED to have a point but your idea and build-up at the start was actually good and I feel that its all gone to waste.
Hope you know what I mean. Good work and keep it up.
It had good ideas, just needed to be displayed better.
Maybe make the characters move more and tweak their design a bit.
But yeah you had good intentions and you can obviously animate so yeah just improve on yourself and you'll be good.
Great animation. It was pretty welly planned out. i also liked the begging. It made it feel like my oun heart was pounding. Great job.
could have used better plaining
ok at the end i would have made it so the other chick grabs that blond and breaks her neck
Thank you for the review... But yeah, I'm not violent, In fact, I like creepy, dark twisted, but not violence... Its not my style... but thank you again for your review...
This is a great music animation, indeed you are a great artist!
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