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A mirror in a toy music box is the portal to creepy parallel universe.
Hey guys... Havn't posted a new flash FOREVER!!! Sorry about that... But Now that I'm finally done with school I can get down and dirty with the creations!!! I really hope you all like this one...
Please give me feed back!!!! I NEED IT!!!
Any comment is helpful!!!
Thanks Always! Ashley Voortman
Always good to see :D
And she's back on the scene! Always fun to watch your stuff. You're getting really good because I believe you're stepping out of your boundaries a bit more each animation. The trick is just to keep doing and drawing new things, new poses, new movements, it helps us grow.
I enjoyed the half ghostly dead bodies in presumable boxes, coffins. Kinda gave an extra oomf to the piece once I saw them. You gotta work a bit on finding a good flow to facial expression to lip synching, it twas too doll like, emotionless, if that was your objective, nvm. I could probably see you playing around a bit more with lighting effects, just because I believe your style is more linked to the classical art depiction of volumetric shadows and lighting. You may have fun experimenting with that under the grainy veil you have on this one and "English Tea"
Awww thanks!!! You are totally right!!! I can't seem to get down facial expressions! People are sooo hard to depict.. (I'll just go with "They where supposed to be doll like") Haha even thought I was going for more realistic... And I TOTALLY SUCK at drawing from different points of view!!! I know music videos need that to keep you entertained, but WOW its hard!!! Lol I guess I have a hard time thinking 3D and always see it as a flat surface! I don't know why... I know there is an easier way of doing it then I have been because i envy so many animators on this site that can do it so fast... Anyways...
I'm always working on a flash I just dont find them ALL newgrounds worthy... haha, But your so right... just keep working on new poses and new movements...
The dead bodies in the boxes, I got that idea from the movie 13 ghosts with the jackle. Where his head was just in the box... lol
Anyways... Its always a pleasure to read your reviews!! Thank you again!! You always have great ideas and point out my flaws (in a good way) as to not make me feel horrible... lol I need that!!!
other than the animation the story behind your animation fit the music video and song ... from i Korn. but it did make allot of sense. make more.
Thanks!! I have allot more flashes!!! and more to come!!!
Silent Hill esque.
I wasn't a fan of the music....but a lot of the animation reminded me of Silent Hill 2
Prob because I love the style silent hill has!!!
holy! the shock factor and impact were definitely there! first few seconds into the video and i've got chills down my spine! the mirror scene at the start alone deserved all my points :) i really liked it, because it is just so disturbing!
Haha that was what i was going for so yeah! Im glad you liked it!!! Thanks for the review!!
10 for animation
but i still give u a five for this cause it was good but i didn't get it at all sort of a music vid really?
Yeah it is a music video, Thanks for the 10! Even though you didnt get it... I'm not sure if there is much to really get in this flash... its just supposed to be disturbing... and strange...
An old storyteller enters a city with nothing but the stories he wishes to pass on...
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