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A mirror in a toy music box is the portal to creepy parallel universe.
Hey guys... Havn't posted a new flash FOREVER!!! Sorry about that... But Now that I'm finally done with school I can get down and dirty with the creations!!! I really hope you all like this one...
Please give me feed back!!!! I NEED IT!!!
Any comment is helpful!!!
Thanks Always! Ashley Voortman
Lets take the positiv stuff first... I really liked the idea of the music box think it was awesomely great, and the thing you do with the music puttin it at the same beat as the movie goes was cool to, the mirror in the start gives me creeps (and thats good like creeps) and i readed in some of your comments belov that your a female abaut time theres a female flash artist that makes kinda creepy shit, think korn where a nice chose but theres allways better choses... Sooo now the negativ stuff...
The thing when you saw the doll in the craig with (dont know how to say the word in enlgish gonna try anyway) the childrens jump numbers (lol) well looket a little to copyd from one of the music vidios from korn and the animations where standard but still kinda catchi... Tired of commentin
Theres more but dont wonna rite anymore.
Keep flashin or ill be ashamed on you>.< (not really) i like your work so dont disepoint os!.
Lol thanks... Actually Yes, I wanted to add a KoRn symbol in there thats why i have the road with the hop scotch in it... I figured everyone know knows KoRn would know what that meant... kinda like a tribute to KoRn more or less... I'm glad you enjoyed it... And I am proud to be a female on NG!! Lol
I LOVE the idea, it's simple, yet genius. And yay for KoRn XD All I can say is keep practicing up on your animation and try to get better quality music - although that is a pain o.o Favorites and a 5 :D
Yeah should have published it with higher quality... didn't realize it was so bad... Thanks for the 9!!! and the review!!!
Wicked sweet music video.
This was pretty awesome,animation was great and had a lot of tripped out scenes to it the start had to be the best part and it just seemed that every part fit perfect with the song,keep up the great work girl.
I loved this. Love KoRn, Loved the animations and the creepy side of the good side.
F*cking awesome, Ashley Voortman, I wish I could subscribe to you.
The guy below me was right, facial expressions and such weren't amazing, but DUDE!! All those things come in time. you're obvoiusly growing as an artist, and quite frankly, thank you for being female and making wicked ass animations.
This made my whole day better, I'll be watching it again.
Haha, Thank You!! I'm always excited to get a new person who appreciates my work.
There are FAR to few females on Newgrounds, and I'm happy to say I'm one of them! I've had to correct allot of people who assume I'm a male.
I'm glad I made your day better, Lol That makes my day better. And Thanks again for your review and 10!
Always good to see :D
And she's back on the scene! Always fun to watch your stuff. You're getting really good because I believe you're stepping out of your boundaries a bit more each animation. The trick is just to keep doing and drawing new things, new poses, new movements, it helps us grow.
I enjoyed the half ghostly dead bodies in presumable boxes, coffins. Kinda gave an extra oomf to the piece once I saw them. You gotta work a bit on finding a good flow to facial expression to lip synching, it twas too doll like, emotionless, if that was your objective, nvm. I could probably see you playing around a bit more with lighting effects, just because I believe your style is more linked to the classical art depiction of volumetric shadows and lighting. You may have fun experimenting with that under the grainy veil you have on this one and "English Tea"
Awww thanks!!! You are totally right!!! I can't seem to get down facial expressions! People are sooo hard to depict.. (I'll just go with "They where supposed to be doll like") Haha even thought I was going for more realistic... And I TOTALLY SUCK at drawing from different points of view!!! I know music videos need that to keep you entertained, but WOW its hard!!! Lol I guess I have a hard time thinking 3D and always see it as a flat surface! I don't know why... I know there is an easier way of doing it then I have been because i envy so many animators on this site that can do it so fast... Anyways...
I'm always working on a flash I just dont find them ALL newgrounds worthy... haha, But your so right... just keep working on new poses and new movements...
The dead bodies in the boxes, I got that idea from the movie 13 ghosts with the jackle. Where his head was just in the box... lol
Anyways... Its always a pleasure to read your reviews!! Thank you again!! You always have great ideas and point out my flaws (in a good way) as to not make me feel horrible... lol I need that!!!
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