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[SG] Too Far

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Apr 14, 2009 | 10:20 PM EDT

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Cake, you ALWAYS take it too far, you seriously need to stop it man, here's why.

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WMPShadezWMPShadez

Rated 2 / 5 stars

This is TotW material.

You did improve, you did lipsyncing, but the high pitched voices were very annoying <_<;
The road looked like a camera was facing from above, but the grandma walking on the road looked like a camera was facing from the car. You failed at perspective.

And no, this ain't an insult, I'm giving criticism.



AxeShadesAxeShades

Rated 1 / 5 stars

Keep em coming, Lava

+1 Voices / sound
+1 for lip sync (It's a first for you!)
+1 for some humor
+1 For drawings and such.

-1 For the obnoxious penis. Yes, Cake is a douchebag but we dont need to spread his gayness into our eyes.
-1 For using obvious google images.

Advice:
The sound got out of sync towards the end- I'm not sure why. Are you using the "Event" sound? Set it to "Stream" instead. If you don't know what i'm talking about i'd be happy to show you.

The ending itself was abrupt. If your flash is going to be short, it needs to be short for a reason. Not because you were lazy. Put something radical or funny at the end. Like a giant explosion. You know what i mean.

Also, come on. You can draw a simple car (Box with four wheels?) and a grandma. It's not that hard. Something like a gun is a little harder to get to look just right, so that would be justifiable if you used some google images or w/e there.

All these things i've touched on are just a FEW things you could improve in your next flash. The thing i'm excited about is that you ARE, in fact, improving. I'd like to see you take this further for the sake of the gang.

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Score: 2 / 10


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