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plz give a good review. enjoy
It needs more work. It starts our promising and then it gets kind of draggy. The music is a good choice, the animation was pretty decent, but, you made some things last to long, like Amy's running. It went nowhere fast and the fight with the four goons was too short as well as not much of a confrontation with Mephiles and the mario background was squished in way to much. So my suggestion is, add a bit more action, some flashy lights so to speak not literally, and explain more of the story in it by adding some headlines through out it or portray it with the movements of your characters. Also, increase the FPS to at least 20 to start with and work your way up to at least 24, that's what I use. Keep at it bro and I'm here should you need further assistance.
It has potential...
Its pretty good for a first attempt, its not great, but its not the worst thing I have seen. My only complaint, a lack of any explanation as to who or why I should care that the "Amy" sprite won the first fight. Fix that, allow for a little smack talk to be had in the video before the "Amy" sprite beats them down, and I will be happy to give you a 10/10. Keep up the good work.
name of song
what was the name of the song? Wasn't really that great to be truthful. I've seen better. Song kicked ass though.
You asked for it
Where to begin...
First the personal stuff, I find your choise of music questionable; I can't understand japanese, I never might, but it's in the way of making a good story.
Right, on to the not-so-professional part.
The walking scene takes too long, the fighting scene is too short and the background sprites are...well...ripped off, the least you could do is try to make it fit better into the scene, not directly ripping it of a game with every other sprite still on it (except for enemies apparently).
Furthermore, the story, if any, was a slight bit blurry, and by blurry I mean I didn't had a clue what was going on and why, who were the dramatis persona anyway?
Ty for the review and i will take your advice. since this was my first one.
by the way the story is a little complicated but i could show you another Intro if you like i'll try and make it fit well
is there something wrong?
you have to wait. unless you have a slow computer
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