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The story of a brave man who loses his donut.
the author of the music is Arvind Venkataraman (RagingFlameOfHorror) and the song was called "Cheesy Shit"
I was thinking about making a second version of this, but I just decided that I want to do simpler stuff. Although I've come to dislike this submission, I'm keeping it up for more tips and helpful reviews.
This flash was hilarious. Could improve on the animation but i think thats what made it.
I had no idea what was going on the entire time, but that's not a bad thing.
The bad thing about this is that the lines are too thick, and the animation is all over the place, which makes it hard to follow. The animation began too abruptly, so I didn't really get what was going on. Still, this wasn't terrible. Just try to improve on a few things.
Thanks , really good tips. :)
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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