well..... nothing too new or Interesting.
Author Comments
My first serious attempt at a movie. Please leave criticism, I'll read it.
Don't worry, this is my first and last madness cartoon. I'll make something original next time. :P
Hope you enjoy it.
it was okay
nice use of the bone tool but the #1 killer of flashes these days is a lame and cut off ending
take time in your flashes and actually FINISH them next time
also, try and make your OWN characters instead of using madness sprite sheets
GuerrilleroHeroico responds:
I didn't use the bone tool, it's all in AS2, and I don't think the bone tool works for it.
As I explained, this flash simply wasn't worth finishing. I don't know why you think I used sprite sheets, I drew everything myself and I hate sprites.
Actually good for a first movie
The graphic part is really nice for a first movie, but the history is not really innovative, and I found it weird the song that starts in the middle. But congratulation for the graphic and animation part ! Really good
GuerrilleroHeroico responds:
My first serious attempt, not my first movie.
Thanks for the review.
It was okay.
Nothing really too special about this; it was neither good nor terrible. However it would've been to your advantage to at least come up with some sort of ending. At least have him open a door and say "what the hell?" rather than abruptly end within 2 seconds of a scene transition. Try to avoid doing that from now on.
GuerrilleroHeroico responds:
The movie was originally supposed to be much longer, but the idea kind of faded away. I wasn't to happy with it and just wanted to nail on a quick ending and start making something better.
well.................
It has a rough end.
GuerrilleroHeroico responds:
Indeed.
