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My first actually submission with sound and etc.
song - > > Waiting To Die< < by Ross (Gunshy)
Considering I'm you and this is your 2nd account, this review shouldn't count.
The animation was pretty good, I did get a little chuckle out of the DBZ audio part.
Areas of improvement: The ending a little abrupt and better audio.
Yeah I didnt really know where to get high-quality sounds, but thanks I will remember to make my ending a little more thought-out.
Made me chuckle a little bit , the animation was well done though.
I'm glad you chuckeled
the animation was good and the music was alright. but the sound effects werent quite fitting. instead of the baby crying, a whine or agonized groan.
Also it seems to cut off short at the end
other than that it's not bad.
thanks. I will try to find better sounds next time I make a cartoon.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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