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Kirby is fishing on a sunny day.
Not bad honestly. Needs sound.. Also needs the frame rate increased and needs something of a background. Other then that it was good and it's a good start to something if you want to continue with it.
Overall 4/10 and a vote of 2 good work and keep it up
all you have to do is increase the frame rate.
Wondering how you did this, why was it so slow?
A great try,but not to the "NG user" liking :-/
Your frame rate is too low,your screen size is too small.
Thats about all the problems to turn a good flash into a blam magnet.
this might have been said before
the animation was slow....i'm not sure if that was intentional but it seemed a little drawn out for a fishing scene like that....
there wasn't any backdrop, not even props....you need to use more of the screen, and put the action in the center.
finally there was no music or sfx....again i'm not sure if that was intentional...but silent animations almost always have music in the background
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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