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Metal Man cracks me up. But don't mess with him!
rip him in half!!!
lol. i predicted he would.
Very well done graphics and storyline. Good Job! Nice flash
This is a very well done short animation. The animation was good, the drawing was amazing, the sound had pretty high quality, and it had a pretty good concept. The animation wassimple, but the zooming were good and made it more complex. Although the sound was good, there were things he said that were hard to understand, so I recommend subtitles. It didn't have a plot or story, but being that it was a short and simple animation, I didn't see were it would be needed. There was a bit of humor in it, but not too much. You also did good with the advertising since you didn't put "threebrain.com" all over the movie.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
Great drawings and great animation all around. Very simple drawing and animation itself, but it was well done. The simple use of the zooms was well used throughout the submission.
I wouldn't mind seeing some more complex animations of the metal man moving more such as arm movement.
~ Story/Content ~
Very short. What you had was alright, but wasn't the best. A little bit of humor in it, but really not too much. I recommend making the submission around 30 seconds longer or so, but at the same time not making it drag on during the submission by adding more humor and everything.
There doesn't need to be a plot or anything like that because it was completely fine being random, but this submission really does need more content behind it.
~ Audio ~
Good voice acting and sound all around. Not really too much more to comment on except for that. Maybe with more animation there would be more room to add sound itself.
~ Overall ~
Not the funniest, not the best content or length of a submission, but the quality of the drawing, animation, and voice was great.
this is great! keep it up.
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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