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Don't Smoke... Please?

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A serious short, spawning from life experiences.

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better than your previous works

i suggest that you create a longer animation, have a better scene of the water dropping on the cigar, and have a longer animation. the meaning is good, and the song is good.

StupidGir responds:

Thank you for your review!

contrary to what other people said about it...

I actually found the graphics a little choppy. The music was good. My advice is to either alter the FPS or do something to make the graphics a bit smoother. I also felt that you could probably do a little more with this animation. Especially the cigarette, i think that, you could probably add a little smoke drifting up and maybe flickering the glow of it a bit too. My favorite part of all though was that you made the person in shadows. Very good job!

StupidGir responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I will keep that in mind on future stuff!

Good meaning

it was beutiful and awsome but make it longer.Nice music

StupidGir responds:

K, thanks!

Forbidden Frequency is on of my favorite songs! Go sheck it out and more of Boux's work up there!

Beutiful

An awesome messege for those who want to hear it, kodos to you.

StupidGir responds:

Thank you!

I like this

I understand your point here and I give a 10 and a 5 thanks for letting people understand smoking herts those we love to

StupidGir responds:

Thank you for your feedback!

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Votes
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Score
2.43 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 7, 2009
10:08 PM EDT