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This is a short little loop I did for school about the negative effects of illegal immigration. I'm aware that it's not very good and all that, so you're entirely welcome to hate it.
It was okay. but It was definetly too long not to have some sort of sound, if not atleast background music. I hadn't read your comments so i didn't actually catch on to the story line until the second time around. Overall the animation was pretty good, it was simple, but effective. I even laughed to myslef a couple times.
Was nice, would have been better with some sound and possibly a little more explanation. Animation was good sadly no color though.
next time use some audio from the audio portal.
i like it good job!
yeah man thatsgood but i wnna give you an 4 and a 8 because thats dint have audio
but good work!
The animation is decent, as is the storyline (I admit it took me a second to realize how it was a depiction of illegal immigration). My biggest problem is the absolute silence. Personal preference for effects and sounds, I know, but it still adds more than, say, coloring would.
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