i scored a terrible 5720.

blazed through the platformer levels, but the boss kicked my ass. the HP penalty for attacking made it a bit more difficult than it should be.

not a bad effot...

from the layout I can see your new too this, but it was a nice try.

The programming seems almost top notch and you have a nice lil game here.

However, found 2 things wrong:

1 - On the yellow level after you kill the pacman thing I couldnt land on any platforms I just dropped through...

2 - A few glitches regarding movement and collecting coins etcc, but these are minor.

Keep practicing :)

Needs something

I liked this game. But there was some problems, how you sometimes glitched through the platforms and how you had to start everything again if you died. Other then that i quite liked it.

Interesting little game here

It's a decent platformer so far but nothing i consider to be bad nor good. it would be about inbetween.

Just about average and while the visuals were comicals it lacked music and sound effects in general.

This can easily be fixed by inserting music into movie clips symbols and setting the audio to stream and use the time line until the song is over.

This results in a endless loop and optimizes the flash at the same time because you can't create an endless loop without movieclips and if you attempt to do so it causes the filesize to inflate to unreasonable sizes such as making a game that should have been 500kb to a meg end up wasting up megs in size that could have been used for making more sub menus with endless loops too and more features within the game.

I liked how the game was at a reasonable size but extra sounds wouldn't add much more to this games filesize as long as it is optimized well as an MP3.

any sound editing software is great for compressing sounds before importing it into flash.

The title screen can be dressed up a little more even if the drawings are not the greatest and those brief set of instructions were a good touch.

Considering including instructions is common sense but it still shocks me that not everyone adds instructions on how to play games.

I would be interested to see you include a bit more of your sense of humor injected into this game because there was a sense of silliness in your drawings.

a sense of humor in general is a lot more infectious in games and in turn making you laugh and most important of all causes you to have even more fun than your already having.

Hell, game classics like earth worm jim had a sense of humor and people still remember that game to this day.

-PowerRangerYELLOW

A good beginning

Obviously your new to this! -And just because havn't submitted a flash, does not mean I can't offer suggestions.

Music - Something chill and kinda up beat probably would be best.

Graphical Stuff- pretty basic, but the plain white background was killer : / . Add some verity to your backgrounds, it doesn't even have to make sense! But colors would help dramatically.

Movement - Well, aside from the fact I thought I could roll on some platforms and couldn't the movement was ok.. Maybe add a run (roll faster) option? This could lead to higher jumps, platforming..etc.

The attacking felt awful though, I will have to say. Try to improve that.

Over all?
You have something, try to put alot more time into creativity wise and control wise. But i think your on to something. Keep goin!