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yes. this is an animation
It was alright
Well this was an ok flash and flash idea, but the file seemed abit large try and reduce the file somewhat
Compress the file to start off
The music hurted my ears. It was a good idea, but it was not very interesting.
The drawings were cool, they looked hand-drawn is that the case? Animation was very simple but it was used enough to move the plot along. I didn't like the music. I don't know if you were going for some kind of noise mix that was supposed to sound all dramatic (that's what I got) but the first bit with that screechy sound hurt my ears. Also the ending was a little anti-climatic, you built up the drama and then the problem is fixed in an unlikely way (unless I missed some small detail) Anyways, overall I liked this because of the graphics and the way you built up the drama.
it was my first flash animation. Tried to do something interesting with the music but it didn't work out. thanx for the comment
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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