One suggestion
Add a preloader, streaming Flash videos degrades the overall performance of the flash.
overall the mood was great, and the animation was smooth when it loaded properly
Author Comments
obscure, a dark wizzard, try to make his own undead army. lets see if he can. one of my first "all made in flash" animation. hope you like it
malkan responds:
thanx for the suggestion, will put some preloader next time :D
Memorable Mood...
Great job with the overall "presence" of the animation. The music definitely fit well and made watching this animation cute and enjoyable.
As for criticism, I suggest taking your time a bit more on the actual animation process, I.E. When you used unnecessary Tweens in place of FBF, when you obviously have some pretty good FBF skills.
Other than that terrific job!
Concise review in Spanish for convenience:
Me gusto much el musica y estoria, no mas trabaja mas an el animacion, gracias mucho!
lol
Winzra
malkan responds:
thank you! yes i am a tradicional animator, this was my first paperless animation it was for an animation festival so i was really short on time, it was made in 2 week.
i will put more time an effort on the animation.
lol thnx for the review in spanish- gracias por el comentairo.-
Great work!
I loved this. Please make more.
You have also inspired me to use the brush tool more opposed to the line tool.
5'd and 10'd.
malkan responds:
wow...it took me 7 months to answer your review... i apologise! im really sorry! U_U And thank you vevry much for the review! im doing new stuff right now! still it will took me sometime until i upload it, but stay tuned!
Actually
French is not the most common language on the internet, so even if it looks extremely well (this looks very very promissing), it won't go to the starts unless it's in English.
However, there doesn't seem to be too much text in it anyway; but just for future reference, English is the lingua franca.
malkan responds:
actually this is in SPANISH the second most common language on the internet(dont really know if thats true :P) but yes, my next submitions will be in english .
pretty cool
I like all the camera angles you used within this flash and was the music created by you or a friend because it was really fitting.
the way you drawn you backgrounds better than your characters and stuck with subtle colors added a lot here.
some novice animators make the mistake of using all there colors at once and this a bit of show of some skill in color theory here.
good use of tweens, shape tweens and frame by frame.
Keep up the good work and excellent first submission.
-PowerRangerYELLOW
malkan responds:
thank you very much! i download the music on a free use web page, teh only thing i have to do is to put some reference from the autor in this case his name is kevin macleod. the strange thing was that i already have finished the animation when i put the music and still fit like a shoe!