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MY FIRST TABLET SUBMISSION not my first submission
i agree with plasticmanicor. music wasnt bad. the animation was awful. the motion was bad. most of all you need a back round! im trying to be constructive here: it doesnt even have to be a detailed background, just make one! its much better then white! to be honest the bg doesnt even have to be an actual place. hell, you can just use a bunch of colors that look good! as i sed, its better then white. all of us fellow animators know that a white bg means you put absoutely 0 effort into it. so atleast make us think you tried with the bg.
but it was alright
need some color and better
10 for the dive...
...but a six for the landing.
Not very funny...
The best joke was the American Idle pun, which was honestly overdone by adding the "Not American Idol" to it. It also had no witty correlation in real life because the people in American Idol are certainly not idle. Besides that, the animations were the type that's only funny because they're completely random. This affect was ruined by the poor animation (seriously, stick figures?). The animation was choppy, too. The text was excessively hard to read, and it didn't contribute much to the story. This entire flash animation looked like it only took you ten minutes.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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