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That was real pretty like. And a work in progress? I hope that includes sound and a preloader! And um...... why is the file size so big? That's pretty confusing......
It was quite rough, and needs the obvious things like music and sound effects (maybe some voices, not sure on your direction), and some of the animation needs to be smoothed out and some areas need a little more transition (when the fire is put out, for example) but not bad at all for the state it's in; it was quite an enjoyable flash and could see the final product going quite well.
the animation was ok, but there was no sound and the story isn't the greatest. I mean, it's not very creative for there to be a fire in a forest and to have "forest spirits put the fire out, but i guess its still being worked on so i think you could improve on it and update as uo said.
the file could use a preloader and masking but other than that the animation was great
eh need sound.
you get a 5 for the animation, but without sound it was to dull to finish.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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