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Biker Road Rage

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rated 3.18 / 5 stars
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Uploaded
Apr 3, 2009 | 9:43 PM EDT

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Author Comments

This is my second complete flash that Ive ever made. This is also my first submission to NewGrounds. The flash stars my main character that i have used in my two flashes, and that i plan to include in many more. I am calling him "Red" for now but I am still trying to decide on a name for him. Let me know if you have any suggestions. In this flash, "Red" wakes up from a nap and hops on his motorcycle. A little ways down the road he runs into trouble and has to kick some ass.

This video was created entirely by myself, but as I am new to flash, i had a few pointers from Battosai810 and The L1st.

Reviews


Zir0Zir0

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not Bad

Hey.

The detail in the art work is a little better in this one. (I reviewed "DON'T CALL ME THAT!", then this one.) The detail of the vehicles, hills, and trees? That's the kind of detail what I was referring to in the other review; not just solid colors. (-:

On this video, the first scene could have been a little better, but it's not too bad. You have a 3D perspective in it, but some objects, such as the legs of the bed, and the closet door (when opened) are flat. Hope that makes sense.

Animation was smooth. Nice parallax scrolling effect in the road scene.

Keep working and learning, and no doubt, your videos will get better.

This one has sounds! :-P

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- Ziro out.


hanman917 responds:

Thanks. I am working on more all the time and I am constantly adding more detail. I am learning as i go. That does make sense when you describe the bed and the closet door. Thanks for the compliments and be on the lookout for more of my videos to come. :)


TOXICsniperTOXICsniper

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad...

not bad considering its only your second flash but the animation could be better and the same goes for sound but overall not bad for a second flash there is potential in you


hanman917 responds:

Thanks for the advice and the compliments. Im going to keep at it.


Eric-1804Eric-1804

Rated 3 / 5 stars

not bad

it wasnt HORRIBLE especialy for your second made the drawings wernt all that great but the animation and flow of it were good id give you a higher score if the drawings were a little better


hanman917 responds:

Thanks for your opinion. Ill keep working on making my graphics better.


TheL1stTheL1st

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

pretty good

good start for an animator, just keep working on those graphix


hanman917 responds:

Thanks Dave, im going to keep working on everything.


The-X-ButtonThe-X-Button

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

That was okay...

I really don't think you took enough time into trying to make it look like it wasn't made in MS Paint. Please be aware that when people are looking for a good Flash animation, they want good graphics to go with it. Otherwise, the animation was pretty good, especially for a beginner.


hanman917 responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I am still learning things about flash. I will keep working and try to improve.