Score: 7
"Well..."
date: September 8, 2009
I can say this had both its good parts as well as some bad parts.
Obviously one of the good parts is that this is funny, but really up until goku appears, as thats when it begins to flop, even in the credits. I liked the use of voice clips from the actual series and the timing of the mouth movements to each spoken piece was spot on.
In terms of the graphics I can see that you were trying to work on better graphics since part 1 but I think you may have tried a bit too hard, they weren't as comical as part 1 and as such didn't have as much of an impact.
Overall it was a good piece of work and it did work well as in continuing on with part 1, but a bit more focus on the presentation would have made it stand out more.
September 16, 2009
Author's Response:
Sorry, not big on dbz, made this in 3 days to try and get back and azlar for part 1. Hopefully the conclusion will stand alone
